Sunday, December 28, 2008

Lovelock Spot


I stand by the same spot.

By the same spot I wait:

Waiting long; Waiting strong.

 

The morning dew & evening laze unfazed.

The Evening laze unfazed, I stand

As a rock; a rusted lock

 

Your love untrue or true,

Untrue or true doeth not break me

And stands my heart unbroken; unshaken.

 

The mob it flows in questions & awe

In questions & awe, unsure & unhope

Of my love’s daylight break; my ceaseless wait.

 

A distant tune of hope strums

Hope strums from a street child’s handmade strings

And stand I inspired; and I wait for you.

 

Sometimes a mirage deludes

A mirage deludes me of your coming sight

A sight I wait – for, unfazed in your love.

 

I plead to my lord – the Supreme

My lord: ‘To you I give myself,

But allow me one final sight of my love.’

 

‘Oh lord! Allow me the pleasure of her company,

Her accompany on this blessed land

The playground of Lucifer & thyself.’

 

In my words heartfelt & slightly distraught;

Slightly distraught but still lovestrong,

I stand by the same spot.


I stand by the same spot.

By the same spot I wait:

Waiting long; Waiting strong.


6 comments:

Asher said...

i liked "A distant tune of hope strums,
Hope strums from a street child’s handmade strings,
And stand I inspired; and I wait for you.

"... thats really poetic.. rest is good :( but this is imprssive :)

Anoop Madhusudanan said...

Same here. Those lines are classic, Classic and wonderful lines.

Write more, write often. A lot of great lines will flow through you. You can bring more beauty into your words when you start listening to yourself.

selva ganapathy said...

good one..... a very well drafted one with appropriate words.. the vocabulary is immaculate... who is she??

is she a specific or just a random one :P

deepika said...

its beautiful,
its touching,
its sooooooooo romantic!!
quite unconventional style of writing..atleast very different from your erlier compositions...

very nice guttu!!

khushi said...

Lovely poem .
"untrue or true .."
Very beautifully written

In Serch of ...... said...

i can say..

"Amazing with full of romance"

It came from core of the heart ....

Good job !!!