Lovelock Spot


I stand by the same spot.

By the same spot I wait:

Waiting long; Waiting strong.

 

The morning dew & evening laze unfazed.

The Evening laze unfazed, I stand

As a rock; a rusted lock

 

Your love untrue or true,

Untrue or true doeth not break me

And stands my heart unbroken; unshaken.

 

The mob it flows in questions & awe

In questions & awe, unsure & unhope

Of my love’s daylight break; my ceaseless wait.

 

A distant tune of hope strums

Hope strums from a street child’s handmade strings

And stand I inspired; and I wait for you.

 

Sometimes a mirage deludes

A mirage deludes me of your coming sight

A sight I wait – for, unfazed in your love.

 

I plead to my lord – the Supreme

My lord: ‘To you I give myself,

But allow me one final sight of my love.’

 

‘Oh lord! Allow me the pleasure of her company,

Her accompany on this blessed land

The playground of Lucifer & thyself.’

 

In my words heartfelt & slightly distraught;

Slightly distraught but still lovestrong,

I stand by the same spot.


I stand by the same spot.

By the same spot I wait:

Waiting long; Waiting strong.


Comments

Asher said…
i liked "A distant tune of hope strums,
Hope strums from a street child’s handmade strings,
And stand I inspired; and I wait for you.

"... thats really poetic.. rest is good :( but this is imprssive :)
December 29, 2008 at 9:38 AM
Unknown said…
Same here. Those lines are classic, Classic and wonderful lines.

Write more, write often. A lot of great lines will flow through you. You can bring more beauty into your words when you start listening to yourself.
December 29, 2008 at 6:41 PM
selva ganapathy said…
good one..... a very well drafted one with appropriate words.. the vocabulary is immaculate... who is she??

is she a specific or just a random one :P
December 29, 2008 at 7:39 PM
Unknown said…
its beautiful,
its touching,
its sooooooooo romantic!!
quite unconventional style of writing..atleast very different from your erlier compositions...

very nice guttu!!
December 29, 2008 at 7:46 PM
khushi said…
Lovely poem .
"untrue or true .."
Very beautifully written
December 29, 2008 at 8:05 PM
दर्शन said…
i can say..

"Amazing with full of romance"

It came from core of the heart ....

Good job !!!
January 5, 2009 at 4:27 PM
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